About Oren and Justine and their first thoughts on storytelling:
- They have 3 kids, both make movies, Justine is going to go back to being a lawyer for a bit to subsidize her “hobby”
- There is a lot of power in titles (“Cancer” vs. “Birth”)
- There is a lot of power in people’s titles too (Being an Imagineer at Disney tells a story in and of itself; there is Dean of Pixar Universtiy; would have been cool if Genevieve from Intel really was the Chief Anthropologist)
- Stories need a “twist“, like in 30 Rock
- Think arcs - tell stories, not situations (Casablanca, not Jurassic Park)
- Be laconic
- Editing yourself is absurdly hard. Good story-telling is absurdly hard. So don’t beat yourself up if you don’t get it right the first time around.
Notes that came as a result of Class Pitches:
- You can make your story sticky by playing on your character(David is a cross between the Stapler Guy from Office Space and Kramer – that’s pretty unique!)
- Letting the audience come to an internal emotional conclusion on its own, by telling them the facts rather than telling them how you felt, is much more powerful
- Think hard about how much of it you have to tell versus how much you should let the audience infer and imagine for itself. Every sentence you utter better be necessary – take a machete to your story, and only leave the diamonds, get rid of the rough.
- BUT, control for the important facts. Be aware that whatever you do leave out will be open to interpretation, so if there are things you would rather the audience not be ambiguous about, stick them in. This is especially important when details make something unique and specific, as opposed to a “trope” that evokes cliches, evoking a been-there-done-that boredom in the audience.
- You can relay blunt information through creative means - instead of saying “he got better”, you can say “5 years later, we were back to wrestling again.”
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